Pelase rate my song lyrics?

I have a band that's made up of four girls. We each sing different parts in this song, so each girl is assigned a number from 1-4. Each time you see the number, that represents that girl is singing. I'm the second voice and wrote the song. And we're all 13. The song is a slow 90's R%26amp;B/ Pop Ballad.

Pelase rate my song lyrics?
I think you have too much going on here. Sounds like you are talking about a relationship then you are saying you need your sisters and friends. Need to stick to one theme. Good Luck.
Reply:those sound good
Reply:I think u girls should go hard. Your only 13 thats heaps cool your writing songs and stuff.


Practice makes perfect.


Sounds good to me, keep it up =]
Reply:Wow... you're 13? thats amazing!!! I think that yall should sing it and upload it on youtube because I really want to hear it. You should consider writing more songs and practicing ALL the time. When you are certain that you're happy with your song and they way y'all sound email me. Send me a video of yourselfs and I'll see what I can do on finding ya'll a record deal. My email mattiehyder@yahoo.com.





Glad I could help!
Reply:Shallow...some notes would help...or maybe not.
Reply:If you're in Los Angeles, send me a PM. You have some good stuff started, but you need to fine tune these lyrics.

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