What do you think of these song lyrics as a poem?

When I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn.


Rejoice ,


every time you hear the sound of my voice.


Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling.


And I didn't feel a thing,


So baby don't feel no pain.


Just smile back





It's from a song "When I'm gone " by Eminem . I think it would make a nice poem too . What do you think ?

What do you think of these song lyrics as a poem?
i think it would be a good poem.
Reply:nice yeah i think that would make a good poem
Reply:it has good lyrics for a song, but some things in it may not work for a poem, like the part when it says "So baby don't feel no pain". its using a double negative, so in writing that wouldn't excatly work, but other than that it sounds like a nice poem.








hope that helped :]
Reply:I love that song.


Good Poem
Reply:yes I agree, its something good to read when you've lost a love one.

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